15 February 2008

still remains

oh loved one, by my side
beauty crowned with oceans' tide.
deluged deep, in drunken fate
how to find a valiant wait.

echo out, dripping dew
answer not fading blue.
fragrant billows, heavy air
naked beauty once was fair.

seeking now the favored eye
drawing in, and calling nigh.
summon high among the plain
wax and wane, his touch, her pain.


Beccalynn said...

did you write that? Cz it's BEAUTIFUL!!!

Beccalynn said...

You always send us on a scavenger hunt with your blogspot address!!!

Beccalynn said...

BTW--I think this one is the best address you've had so far!

Beccalynn said...

When I read your poem again I understand it more...it's so beautiful! I LOVE good poetry that has you coming back and finding more each time you happen upon it. It's like a really good meal on a hungry stomach.

Ninita said...

It has been awhile since I have checked your blog. It was nice to spend the evening with you at B & N. Enjoy your day off tomorrow :).